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Command and Control

Another one from the Archives originally posted August 2nd 2011. 

I shall leave it to your imagination as to where the inspiration for this piece came from but it always makes me smile when I think about it. 

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Command and Control

The man at the next table turns to once again look at you as you yelp. He has been watching all through lunch as the noises and moans have become louder and louder. 

The waiters have been very attentive, passing by your table, checking everything is in order, that you are happy. It is as if they can sense how turned on you are right now, the animal instinct men possess tracking you down your need, hunting for the easy kill. 

Your legs are shaking as the final wave of another orgasm passes over you. Knuckles white as you hold on to the tabletop trying to retain some sense of calm, holding on to your last shred of dignity. You lick the perspiration from your lips, the skin exposed through the open necked shirt glows with its own sheen.

Breathing deeply, you try and control your errant body, command it to relax and recover before the next wave hits you. 

Your phone quietly buzzes on the table, you quickly flick it on and read the message and you gasp under your breath, ‘God no, please stop.’  The words on the tiny screen have just shattered any calm you had managed to claw back. Unable to avoid it, you are forced to read and reply otherwise the punishment will be ten times worse. 

You tap the keys quickly as the first vibration rumble within you, setting up a chain reaction of sympathetic tremors throughout your body. Your fingers stumble over the keys, desperate to answer, unable to concentrate, a panicked rush to answer and stem the flow. 

As you hit send another burst of nightmare ecstasy hits you, forcing another groan from between your clenched lips, both hands grasping the tabletop, leaning over in an attempt to reign in your body. 

You watch in slow motion as a drop of sweat peels away from your lips and crashes with glacial slowness in to your soup, sending waves through the liquid mirroring the undulations careering through your cunt. 

Waving away the waiter asking if all is well with madam, you run back through the moment again that led to this, that second of back chat, the loss of poise and control. You had bought the toy for him to use in the bedroom but you never thought he would want to take it so far. But you knew, the second the words left your mouth your fate was sealed. 

His retort, the tone heavy with menace and dry amusement created a flood of fear and excitement between your legs, your pussy drenched at the thought of what was to come. 

‘Let me?’ the snarl on his lips, spitting out the words all that was needed to force the physical reaction in you. ‘Let me? Oh babydoll, you really have so much to learn about what we have don’t you. And there is no time like now to learn.’

You moaned loudly then as he bent you over his desk and pushed the smooth white eggs between your dripping lips, his fingers like red hot pokers to your inflamed flesh, causing you to grind against him until the sharp crack of his other hand forced you to stillness. 

The sound of the door slamming was still ringing in your ears, the only real memory of how you got from his hotel room to the restaurant table he had booked for you. This was a quiet, refined, select place, full of hushed conversations, powerful deals and elegant laughter. 

Heart sinking as the maitre d’ walked you passed hushed tables, knowing there was going to be nowhere to hide. Your blood drains from your face as you recognise the faces of clients and business contacts among the dinners.

Worse still, as he pulled the chair back for you, another wave of vibrations shook your core, forcing you to wobble and grab his arm for support. His kind concern, quickly dismissed with a crooked smile. 

The last hour had been relentless, endless messages, detailed descriptions of what was awaiting you once this trial was over, how he was going to use you, enslave your cunt, dominate your arse and possess your mouth. 

His command to you, to read every message and reply instantly. For every moment of delay another wave of pleasure would be signalled through to the devious device placed deep inside you. 

The urgent buzz of your phone breaks in to your thoughts, trembling hands scramble to take hold, his words flood over you again and once again you react, your cunt contracting and pulsing, flashes of heat storm across your face, breasts heave and your heart hammers against your chest. 

And then the impending tsunami of pleasure and pain crashes over you, a low guttural growl emerging unbidden from deep inside. It is at that point you know you are lost, you drop the phone no longer able to withstand the onslaught. 

Unable to resist, you let go and instead embrace the wave of pleasure as it hits you, squeezing your thighs together to grab your way towards release. Your core reverberates over and over, all pretence lost, head down, growling, moaning, terrified and wanton. 

Slipping a hand beneath the table, you push yourself beyond the tipping point, crumbling under the pressure, screaming out, collapsing on to the table - all eyes on you, suddenly aware of the presence next to you. 

Even in your post orgasmic haze, you prepare for the reprimand, steel yourself for the final humiliation of being ejected, thrown out in front of the glaring audience. What you don’t expect are strong arms wrapping around you, his scent enveloping you, his words of comfort in your ear 

‘Time to go baby, time to go’, as a handful of cash is thrown to the table as you are swept up and away. 

You curl in to his chest, eyes tight hiding from accusing eyes, deaf to the raised questioning voices as you retreat, oblivious to the hushed, urgent conversations of heated couples, ignited to their own fury by your display. 

Sliding in to the back of the waiting cab, he places you gently on his lap, head cradled beneath strong hands. His words and hands stroking, calming you. The fever between your thighs abating, still slick from your lesson, you find solace in his embrace. 

‘Good girl’ 

It is all you need to hear for now, you both know your lesson has been learnt. Eyes shut tight, rocked by the motion of the cab as it moves through traffic, you take a moment to remember the thrill, the ecstasy of those final moments. 

‘Yes Sir’

And you realise you were never more alive, never more true to who you really are than at that moment, lost to everything, no pretence, no qualms, no self control, only his command. 

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Scent

Another one from the archives - originally posted on 10th Feb 2011.

This one came about after stopping to look around me one day on the train following another delay and take the time to really notice my surroundings. To stop for a moment and really spend the time to take in the details of what was around me. And what I actually noticed were all the subtle sexy hints that were there in my fellow passengers, on display if you cared to notice. 

The small details, the tiny little items that spin past us during the daily grind that would never be noticed by anyone else, but seem to scream out if you care to look. In fact if you stop and really look, to take in every finesse of the way a woman has dressed, holds herself or even absentmindedly touches her hair, these can flood your senses and the mind with wicked possibilities.

Of course that just might be the dark deviant corners of my mind taking over for a time. 

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Scent

Travelling each day into the City, the monotony of the same routine, same time each day, same carriage, same faces. No one really talks, most working through papers, books or plugged in to iPhones or laptops. 

All apart from her.

I don’t know why, but there was something different. Yes she was attractive, well groomed and dressed well, I always noticed her legs as she stepped on to the train, wrapped in sheer black stockings, which she always finished off with a perfect pair of expensive high heels.

I think it was her face that really captured my attention though, a strong face,framed by beautiful long dark hair, out of which looked the most amazing eyes. We had caught each others gaze a thousand times before, over a myriad of journeys but each time a shiver would always rocket through me.

Those eyes would pierce through me but she would always move on quickly, taking a seat elsewhere in the carriage. We may occasionally catch each others glance, but no more than a briefest of contact.

Today however was different, as we board the busy train, another delay has meant many more people than normal leaving only two seats side by side. I stand aside and offer her a seat, for which I get a short smile of thanks but for the first time she holds my gaze.  As she glances away again to take her seat, the smallest of smiles passes her lips. 

We sit together, the train seats cramped so we are forced to sit close but do what we can to not touch, despite the proximity. 

I can’t help but look down at her legs, peeking from under the tight black pencil skirt, perfection in those black stockings while the heel of her shoe forces her ankle into a perfect shape. 

I am so aware of her next to me, her scent washes over me and I bite my lip to diminish the effect she is having on me.  Ever so slowly her legs relax and comes to rest against mine. I don’t move away but hold very still - savouring this unexpected physical contact. I feel a little sad that I crave such a thing, but her legs look fantastic and the weight of her leg against mine is pleasing. 

She casually rests a hand against her thigh and then drops it ever so slightly, almost absentmindedly coming to rest against my leg. I tense a little bit unsure of whether this is intentional or not. A moment later she answers my question by sliding her little finger, hidden below her hand, along the seam of my trousers. 

I stiffen almost immediately, and I can feel her tense. I slowly turn to face her, as if looking out of the window. She faces forward, holding still and then she turns her head and her eyes catch mine. 

As they do, her hand moves more firmly actually brushing along my thigh as she shifts position, her fingers brushing my crotch. The smile that comes to her face, tells me she knows I am hard.  I look at her questioningly, nothing is said and everything is said. I shift position and let my hand brush her leg, the rough feel of her stockings, electric, sending a further pulse of need through me. 
She now places more of her weight against me, leaning in further, her breast resting against me. 

We sit like that, while the train makes it’s way to its destination, each furtive  touch between us a little bolder than the last. I glance around the other passengers, but no one lifts their head above their own personal daily grind. The presence of so many others, heightens each touch. 

As the train finally pulls into its destination, our hands find each other and I can finally feel her heat. She is shaking and her fingers dig deep into my hand. . 
We let the last of the crowd fight their way off the train ignoring us, and I reach up touching that face I’ve long admired and lean forward kissing her deeply.

She responds immediately pushing her tongue into my mouth, shifting her body further into mine. 

We break away as new passengers start to board the train, and I stand pulling her gently to her feet and lead her from the train. 

Our hands flitting across each other. I already know where I’m taking her. A small courtyard is next to the station, deserted this time of morning. As we enter our hands are more urgent now, she tugs at my belt as I push her into an alcove. 

The risk we might be seen from the street if someone took the time to look into the courtyard matters little as I lift her skirt to her waist. The urgency is with us both now, driven by a thousand glances, an unspoken passion, never acted upon. 

She has my cock in her hand roughly, urgently pulling me to her. Her knickers tear as I pull them aside and I slam her against the cold stone wall, my cock sliding easily into her dripping wet cunt. I pull one leg up around me and as she wraps the other around me, I take her weight against me, burying my cock to the hilt. 

We buck against each other, tasting each other deeply, her hands in my hair pulling me into her, holding me there. 

As my thrusts slam her against the wall she gasps and I feel her pussy tighten, and begin to embrace my cock, shudders running through me, my legs shaking with the strain. Finally spent we stay like that, my cock still inside, teased by ongoing spasms. 

As I look at her I know neither of us will be going to work today…

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I want you again, to slide my hands around your waist and pull you into me, so you can feel me hard against you. My hand sliding along your back, my fingers grasping your hair, pulling your head back…. more
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Originally posted - January 17th 2011 
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Anticipation

I want you again, to slide my hands around your waist and pull you into me, so you can feel me hard against you. My hand sliding along your back, my fingers grasping your hair, pulling your head back…. more

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Originally posted - January 17th 2011 

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Words by The Dirty Romantic (aka You Make Me Need You)

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Anticipation

One from the archives 

The following is actually a set of individual pieces I published over a number of weeks in January last year when I first start writing. They were linked as part of a common story in my head but appeared over a number of days as little segments - so I’ve put them all together here for the first time.

Strange to read it all in one go - it is all a little clunky but it is pleasing to know I’ve come along quite nicely from the earlier work. 

One of the pictures that inspired the work can be found here. 

Part I

I want you again, to slide my hands around your waist and pull you into me, so you can feel me hard against you. My hand sliding along your back, my fingers grasping your hair, pulling your head back. My other hand slips between your soft thighs, feeling your warmth, my fingers pressing against you as you push back against me with the anticipation for what is to come… 

Part II

I need you now, I want to be inside that wet pussy but I want you to need it more. I push you down on to the bed, sliding my fingers inside you, pushing deep inside you. You push your hips up, forcing my fingers further inside. I can feel you getting close but it’s not time yet. I hold my fingers still, curling up inside and pressing hard inside you.

You shudder but then hold still as I run my lips over your breast, slowing taking a nipple into my mouth, biting down hard just to feel you squirm underneath me. Satisfied I move down your body, slowly, taking time to stop, lick, bite and tease. You are going to have to wait until I’m ready for you to cum…

Part II

I’m finally where you want me to be, pushing my face deep between your thighs. As I slowly run my tounge across your wet lips I can feel you twitch and tense. I increase the pressure of my tongue, parting your lips and tasting you properly for the first time.

I feel your hand on the back of my head pressing me harder in to you, while you arch your hips towards me, forcing me to take more of you. My tongue moves more quickly now. I bring my hand between your thighs and slide first one, then two, three fingers inside your swollen pussy.

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One from the archives - originally posted on 17th Jan 2011. 

As you get close, I start to pull away, I want you to need it more, to scream for it. You whisper ‘No, now’ but I still pull back. 

But you can’t wait, you need that release, you shout now ‘Fuck me, make me fucking cum’ as your hand grabs the back of my head, pulling my hair, forcing my face back into the steam between your legs. 

I resist, just to see how much you want it, running a finger across your clit just to feel you shudder. You groan and your other hand comes up, grabbing more hair pulling with all your might, ‘Now’ you groan, ‘Please’. 

I want to feel your release and I relent, letting you pull me into you - it won’t be so easy next time, but it’s been so long and I want to hear you shout, want to hear you scream out my name. So I delve into you again, fast and hard, my tongue and fingers working together to bring you to the end. 

I can feel you start to tense, you start to pulse around my fingers as I press harder inside you, looking for that place I know will get you off. Your hands tighten, you crush me into you, you arch your back, begin to moan, bucking against me as I force your hips down. 

Then the release, the first wave hits, every movement of my lips, tongue, fingers plays you now, twitching at the slightest touch - coming hard now I hear the ‘yesss, god yess’ slip from your lips. The pressure builds again and you look to move away, the intensity too much but it’s not going to be that easy - I want to feel you, hear you scream - I move my hands behind your hips, clamping you to my mouth. I bury my mouth in you, sucking deeply, relentlessly. 

You push harder against me and I just hold tighter, as your hands begin to pull against my hair, and you try to pull away. Fighting me as the pleasure and pain begin to mix, and then it hits you, every part of you pulsing, moving, alive. 

I loosen my hold between your thighs and move instead to hold you close as the last waves pass. Feeling you relax back, as I look up I can see that satisfied smirk on your face, your hair tussled over your eyes - looking as sexy as you ever do, the after glow making you sparkle. 

All this time I’ve been hard, restraining the need to be inside you. I come up from the floor and roll over onto the bed. I look at you, you smile and move towards me…

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I'm an English male writer of erotic stories with a mix of the romantic and dirty, the straight and the deviant, vanilla and flavoured, suggestive, subtle, obvious, passion, bondage and dominance.

I enjoy the erotic, sensual nature of the written word, those thoughts and images that create the slow burn, the tease building tension. But there is still a need for the harsh, rough animal side, for teeth, claws, passion and violent need.

This is where I come to write, to express all those thoughts, ideas, needs and wants. I like to mix my words with images, to create an accent for those that come to read.

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